| Message ID | 20230519085802.2106900-2-lizhijian@cn.fujitsu.com (mailing list archive) |
|---|---|
| State | New, archived |
| Headers | show |
| Series | [1/2] docs/cxl: Correct CFMW number | expand |
On Fri, 19 May 2023 16:58:02 +0800 Li Zhijian <lizhijian@cn.fujitsu.com> wrote: > Using the same style except the 'Topo' abbreviation. > > Signed-off-by: Li Zhijian <lizhijian@cn.fujitsu.com> > --- > I'm not a native speaker, feel free to correct me. I've edited slightly and applied to my local staging tree for cxl patches. Includes fixing docs/clx -> docs/cxl in the patch title. Thanks, I'll queue this up with the next series of refactoring patches etc, Jonathan > --- > docs/system/devices/cxl.rst | 8 ++++---- > 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst b/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst > index d3577a4d6da..56414d25871 100644 > --- a/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst > +++ b/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst > @@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ responsible for allocating appropriate ranges from within the CFMWs > and exposing those via normal memory configurations as would be done > for system RAM. > > -Example system Topology. x marks the match in each decoder level:: > +Example system topology. x marks the match in each decoder level:: > > |<------------------SYSTEM PHYSICAL ADDRESS MAP (1)----------------->| > | __________ __________________________________ __________ | > @@ -187,8 +187,8 @@ Example system Topology. x marks the match in each decoder level:: > ___________|___ __________|__ __|_________ ___|_________ > (3)| Root Port 0 | | Root Port 1 | | Root Port 2| | Root Port 3 | > | Appears in | | Appears in | | Appears in | | Appear in | > - | PCI topology | | PCI Topology| | PCI Topo | | PCI Topo | > - | As 0c:00.0 | | as 0c:01.0 | | as de:00.0 | | as de:01.0 | > + | PCI topology | | PCI topology| | PCI Topo | | PCI Topo | I've switched to topo for the abbreviation as well. No particular reason it should have a capital letter. > + | as 0c:00.0 | | as 0c:01.0 | | as de:00.0 | | as de:01.0 | > |_______________| |_____________| |____________| |_____________| > | | | | > | | | | > @@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ Example topology involving a switch:: > | Root Port 0 | > | Appears in | > | PCI topology | > - | As 0c:00.0 | > + | as 0c:00.0 | > |___________x___| > | > |
On 25/05/2023 19:49, Jonathan Cameron via wrote: > On Fri, 19 May 2023 16:58:02 +0800 > Li Zhijian <lizhijian@cn.fujitsu.com> wrote: > >> Using the same style except the 'Topo' abbreviation. >> >> Signed-off-by: Li Zhijian <lizhijian@cn.fujitsu.com> >> --- >> I'm not a native speaker, feel free to correct me. > > I've edited slightly and applied to my local staging tree for cxl patches. > Includes fixing docs/clx -> docs/cxl in the patch title. > Thanks, I'll queue this up with the next series of refactoring patches etc, Thank you for your help. Thanks Zhijian > > Jonathan > > >> --- >> docs/system/devices/cxl.rst | 8 ++++---- >> 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) >> >> diff --git a/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst b/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst >> index d3577a4d6da..56414d25871 100644 >> --- a/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst >> +++ b/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst >> @@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ responsible for allocating appropriate ranges from within the CFMWs >> and exposing those via normal memory configurations as would be done >> for system RAM. >> >> -Example system Topology. x marks the match in each decoder level:: >> +Example system topology. x marks the match in each decoder level:: >> >> |<------------------SYSTEM PHYSICAL ADDRESS MAP (1)----------------->| >> | __________ __________________________________ __________ | >> @@ -187,8 +187,8 @@ Example system Topology. x marks the match in each decoder level:: >> ___________|___ __________|__ __|_________ ___|_________ >> (3)| Root Port 0 | | Root Port 1 | | Root Port 2| | Root Port 3 | >> | Appears in | | Appears in | | Appears in | | Appear in | >> - | PCI topology | | PCI Topology| | PCI Topo | | PCI Topo | >> - | As 0c:00.0 | | as 0c:01.0 | | as de:00.0 | | as de:01.0 | >> + | PCI topology | | PCI topology| | PCI Topo | | PCI Topo | > > I've switched to topo for the abbreviation as well. No particular reason > it should have a capital letter. > >> + | as 0c:00.0 | | as 0c:01.0 | | as de:00.0 | | as de:01.0 | >> |_______________| |_____________| |____________| |_____________| >> | | | | >> | | | | >> @@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ Example topology involving a switch:: >> | Root Port 0 | >> | Appears in | >> | PCI topology | >> - | As 0c:00.0 | >> + | as 0c:00.0 | >> |___________x___| >> | >> | > >
diff --git a/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst b/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst index d3577a4d6da..56414d25871 100644 --- a/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst +++ b/docs/system/devices/cxl.rst @@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ responsible for allocating appropriate ranges from within the CFMWs and exposing those via normal memory configurations as would be done for system RAM. -Example system Topology. x marks the match in each decoder level:: +Example system topology. x marks the match in each decoder level:: |<------------------SYSTEM PHYSICAL ADDRESS MAP (1)----------------->| | __________ __________________________________ __________ | @@ -187,8 +187,8 @@ Example system Topology. x marks the match in each decoder level:: ___________|___ __________|__ __|_________ ___|_________ (3)| Root Port 0 | | Root Port 1 | | Root Port 2| | Root Port 3 | | Appears in | | Appears in | | Appears in | | Appear in | - | PCI topology | | PCI Topology| | PCI Topo | | PCI Topo | - | As 0c:00.0 | | as 0c:01.0 | | as de:00.0 | | as de:01.0 | + | PCI topology | | PCI topology| | PCI Topo | | PCI Topo | + | as 0c:00.0 | | as 0c:01.0 | | as de:00.0 | | as de:01.0 | |_______________| |_____________| |____________| |_____________| | | | | | | | | @@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ Example topology involving a switch:: | Root Port 0 | | Appears in | | PCI topology | - | As 0c:00.0 | + | as 0c:00.0 | |___________x___| | |
Using the same style except the 'Topo' abbreviation. Signed-off-by: Li Zhijian <lizhijian@cn.fujitsu.com> --- I'm not a native speaker, feel free to correct me. --- docs/system/devices/cxl.rst | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)