| Message ID | cf18d0a24e393191ec243bb67aecfd7631429576.1736959522.git.bernhard.kaindl@cloud.com (mailing list archive) |
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| Series | docs: Fix spaces and capitalisation of proper nouns and abbreviations | expand |
On Wed, 15 Jan 2025, Bernhard Kaindl wrote: > Signed-off-by: Bernhard Kaindl <bernhard.kaindl@cloud.com> > --- > SUPPORT.md | 18 +++++++++--------- > docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md | 2 +- > 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/SUPPORT.md b/SUPPORT.md > index 2bc5bd81ee..9478b70b1b 100644 > --- a/SUPPORT.md > +++ b/SUPPORT.md > @@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ Go (golang) bindings for libxl > > ### Linux device model stubdomains > > -Support for running qemu-xen device model in a linux stubdomain. > +Support for running the qemu-xen device model in a Linux stubdomain. > > Status: Tech Preview > > @@ -626,7 +626,7 @@ Guest-side driver capable of speaking the Xen 9pfs protocol > > ### PVCalls (frontend) > > -Guest-side driver capable of making pv system calls > +Guest-side driver capable of making PV system calls > > Status, Linux: Tech Preview > > @@ -1060,8 +1060,8 @@ This file contains prose, and machine-readable fragments. > The data in a machine-readable fragment relate to > the section and subsection in which it is found. > > -The file is in markdown format. > -The machine-readable fragments are markdown literals > +The file is in Markdown format. > +The machine-readable fragments are Markdown literals > containing RFC-822-like (deb822-like) data. > > In each case, descriptions which expand on the name of a feature as > @@ -1125,7 +1125,7 @@ in such a case this feature may be described as "Stable / Interface not stable". > > Does it behave like a fully functional feature? > Does it work on all expected platforms, > -or does it only work for a very specific sub-case? > +or does it only work for a very specific subcase? > Does it have a sensible UI, > or do you have to have a deep understanding of the internals > to get it to work properly? > @@ -1168,7 +1168,7 @@ will they still work when I upgrade to the next version? > > * **Stable** > > - We will try very hard to avoid breaking backwards compatibility, > + We will try very hard to avoid breaking backwards compatibility, > and to fix any regressions that are reported. > > ### Security supported > @@ -1200,7 +1200,7 @@ are given the following labels: > * **Supported, Security support external** > > This feature is security supported > - by a different organization (not the XenProject). > + by a different organization (not the Xen Project). > The extent of support is defined by that organization. > It might be limited, e.g. like described in **Supported, with caveats** > below. > @@ -1221,8 +1221,8 @@ Some features are only for HVM guests; some don't work with migration, &c. > > ### External security support > > -The XenProject security team > -provides security support for XenProject projects. > +The Xen Project security team > +provides security support for the various projects of the Xen Project. We called sub-projects, I am not sure with or without the dash: provides security support for the various sub-projects part of the Xen Project. > We also provide security support for Xen-related code in Linux, > which is an external project but doesn't have its own security process. > diff --git a/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md b/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md > index 603491f24d..3be33adf6a 100644 > --- a/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md > +++ b/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md > @@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ namespaces): > unshare(CLONE_NEWNET); > > QEMU does actually use the network namespace as a Xen DM for two > -purposes: 1) To set up network tap devices 2) To open vnc connections. > +purposes: 1) To set up network tap devices 2) To open VNC connections. > > #### Network > > -- > 2.43.0 >
diff --git a/SUPPORT.md b/SUPPORT.md index 2bc5bd81ee..9478b70b1b 100644 --- a/SUPPORT.md +++ b/SUPPORT.md @@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ Go (golang) bindings for libxl ### Linux device model stubdomains -Support for running qemu-xen device model in a linux stubdomain. +Support for running the qemu-xen device model in a Linux stubdomain. Status: Tech Preview @@ -626,7 +626,7 @@ Guest-side driver capable of speaking the Xen 9pfs protocol ### PVCalls (frontend) -Guest-side driver capable of making pv system calls +Guest-side driver capable of making PV system calls Status, Linux: Tech Preview @@ -1060,8 +1060,8 @@ This file contains prose, and machine-readable fragments. The data in a machine-readable fragment relate to the section and subsection in which it is found. -The file is in markdown format. -The machine-readable fragments are markdown literals +The file is in Markdown format. +The machine-readable fragments are Markdown literals containing RFC-822-like (deb822-like) data. In each case, descriptions which expand on the name of a feature as @@ -1125,7 +1125,7 @@ in such a case this feature may be described as "Stable / Interface not stable". Does it behave like a fully functional feature? Does it work on all expected platforms, -or does it only work for a very specific sub-case? +or does it only work for a very specific subcase? Does it have a sensible UI, or do you have to have a deep understanding of the internals to get it to work properly? @@ -1168,7 +1168,7 @@ will they still work when I upgrade to the next version? * **Stable** - We will try very hard to avoid breaking backwards compatibility, + We will try very hard to avoid breaking backwards compatibility, and to fix any regressions that are reported. ### Security supported @@ -1200,7 +1200,7 @@ are given the following labels: * **Supported, Security support external** This feature is security supported - by a different organization (not the XenProject). + by a different organization (not the Xen Project). The extent of support is defined by that organization. It might be limited, e.g. like described in **Supported, with caveats** below. @@ -1221,8 +1221,8 @@ Some features are only for HVM guests; some don't work with migration, &c. ### External security support -The XenProject security team -provides security support for XenProject projects. +The Xen Project security team +provides security support for the various projects of the Xen Project. We also provide security support for Xen-related code in Linux, which is an external project but doesn't have its own security process. diff --git a/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md b/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md index 603491f24d..3be33adf6a 100644 --- a/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md +++ b/docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md @@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ namespaces): unshare(CLONE_NEWNET); QEMU does actually use the network namespace as a Xen DM for two -purposes: 1) To set up network tap devices 2) To open vnc connections. +purposes: 1) To set up network tap devices 2) To open VNC connections. #### Network
Signed-off-by: Bernhard Kaindl <bernhard.kaindl@cloud.com> --- SUPPORT.md | 18 +++++++++--------- docs/designs/qemu-deprivilege.md | 2 +- 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)