From patchwork Sun Oct 24 17:08:21 2021 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Patchwork-Submitter: =?utf-8?q?Martin_=C3=85gren?= X-Patchwork-Id: 12580349 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D8978C433F5 for ; Sun, 24 Oct 2021 17:09:07 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B754E60FDA for ; Sun, 24 Oct 2021 17:09:07 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S231508AbhJXRL1 (ORCPT ); Sun, 24 Oct 2021 13:11:27 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:37044 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S231504AbhJXRL0 (ORCPT ); Sun, 24 Oct 2021 13:11:26 -0400 Received: from mail-ed1-x52f.google.com (mail-ed1-x52f.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:4864:20::52f]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 38E85C061745 for ; Sun, 24 Oct 2021 10:09:05 -0700 (PDT) Received: by mail-ed1-x52f.google.com with SMTP id a26so7926843edy.11 for ; Sun, 24 Oct 2021 10:09:05 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20210112; h=from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:in-reply-to:references :mime-version:content-transfer-encoding; bh=TKf/hcFh4eqosjLbR6Om1WGVF8nPaR2gDbDgmjCuq8o=; b=N/rSGzP/203dPSwz4PxxIXGSTEGUYsDTLtRiypwWCmLj4JJSMM3sXVCne9c2Xp8Oo4 XY42Eplxdr9P+FcQG5zEHYu/xjCecGprmQEhMOC+9n1ExZte9dUnexNaLJaqjQC/+43U bzp6ogmNsdLk7RjvwBAo6C6029VD9nRtscQOjnmXqS72S9JtQU0OsmsrY8D7R2j4TOah Q8w3DVc97CGaz36SXxmEemQBXAaEItkz84hkbLKsWbCEpehiXIrpKNJGU5gNNmbKc0ny ANh6BsSsOUP5kGEpm0HKQG5Ejj1XIcI3iwyoCZLd4S3httB3fQtVPC34eId6p1es3gBs 7BDg== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20210112; h=x-gm-message-state:from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:in-reply-to :references:mime-version:content-transfer-encoding; bh=TKf/hcFh4eqosjLbR6Om1WGVF8nPaR2gDbDgmjCuq8o=; b=6IK07dZ1EnI7Tjnfg6ZUcfn5lse9m4NULgDv/eG+jYaXVL/mS5+NGQ0dRHXC4UwfMA 0XcwKhMMWWte3lhcWN09HEwgG3nC2J7JCYGc42ONG4wREi1Js91b/8eX+MzVyxNu9bws bgy8d3hebhdsvcUmGo3b31KdZ4TTKd1xZt9iTgJBf/lqcnObfvZpX16ihed43LD2VwuK C8dKbmwzrHtSGX+78u9/W/ICHN+9TyJyj43Eo/5XII+6u8cVt1YSz1Sl0gZxaNTK1dhM PsxlJWug/VNai/TlfwOSWSoy3rOsfexHqYG4xgz7mZsnfUm8Jvz+gKDhpWtOUocs2Gt9 0AUw== X-Gm-Message-State: AOAM533AkW1hSTUQmON4x8JG4nNnuJGY62uUv55DGM8QdxPrtBrKmGLF DnBJDwvGwz/szQOvVHP6akQkxJUK9+EYhg== X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJxRutWM5kuRjAZsPZlML4ltzre0kNuplY89CGWnbRS0ybP1DMCxNfgf9oCcgsG+4T4UdJtN1g== X-Received: by 2002:a17:906:4d97:: with SMTP id s23mr15992009eju.105.1635095343551; Sun, 24 Oct 2021 10:09:03 -0700 (PDT) Received: from lena.c.hoisthospitality.com ([194.209.187.34]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id v13sm6369378ejo.36.2021.10.24.10.09.02 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Sun, 24 Oct 2021 10:09:02 -0700 (PDT) From: =?utf-8?q?Martin_=C3=85gren?= To: git@vger.kernel.org Cc: =?utf-8?b?w4Z2YXIgQXJuZmrDtnLDsCBCamFybWFzb24=?= Subject: [PATCH 2/2] git-bundle.txt: add missing words and punctuation Date: Sun, 24 Oct 2021 19:08:21 +0200 Message-Id: <7defb11c1c295550105a47bfdd9f030e0ef7c636.1635093692.git.martin.agren@gmail.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.33.1.711.g9d530dc002 In-Reply-To: References: MIME-Version: 1.0 Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org Add an "and" to separate the two halves of the first sentence of the paragraph more. Add a comma to similarly separate the two halves of the second sentence a bit better. Add a period at the end of the paragraph. Further down in the file, add the missing "be" in "must be accompanied". Signed-off-by: Martin Ågren --- Documentation/git-bundle.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt index ac0d003835..50ea8c82ca 100644 --- a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt +++ b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt @@ -51,10 +51,10 @@ using the `--thin` option to linkgit:git-pack-objects[1], and unbundled using the `--fix-thin` option to linkgit:git-index-pack[1]. There is no option to create a "thick pack" when using revision -exclusions, users should not be concerned about the difference. By -using "thin packs" bundles created using exclusions are smaller in +exclusions, and users should not be concerned about the difference. By +using "thin packs", bundles created using exclusions are smaller in size. That they're "thin" under the hood is merely noted here as a -curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation +curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation. See link:technical/bundle-format.html[the `bundle-format` documentation] for more details and the discussion of "thin pack" in @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ unbundle :: SPECIFYING REFERENCES --------------------- -Revisions must accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a +Revisions must be accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a bundle. More than one reference may be packaged, and more than one set of prerequisite objects can