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[v2] doc: Fix some errors in ras.rst

Message ID 20200506162217.16633-1-longman@redhat.com (mailing list archive)
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Waiman Long May 6, 2020, 4:22 p.m. UTC
Make some miscellaneous fixes to the first paragraph of "ECC memory":
 - Change the incorrect "74 bits" to "72 bits".
 - Change "mentioned on" to "mentioned in".
 - Remove the extra "extra".
 - Rephrase some sentences as suggested by Matthew Wilcox.

Signed-off-by: Waiman Long <longman@redhat.com>
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 Documentation/admin-guide/ras.rst | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

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Matthew Wilcox May 6, 2020, 4:37 p.m. UTC | #1
On Wed, May 06, 2020 at 12:22:17PM -0400, Waiman Long wrote:
> Make some miscellaneous fixes to the first paragraph of "ECC memory":
>  - Change the incorrect "74 bits" to "72 bits".
>  - Change "mentioned on" to "mentioned in".
>  - Remove the extra "extra".
>  - Rephrase some sentences as suggested by Matthew Wilcox.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Waiman Long <longman@redhat.com>

Reviewed-by: Matthew Wilcox (Oracle) <willy@infradead.org>
Jonathan Corbet May 15, 2020, 5:38 p.m. UTC | #2
On Wed, 6 May 2020 09:37:15 -0700
Matthew Wilcox <willy@infradead.org> wrote:

> On Wed, May 06, 2020 at 12:22:17PM -0400, Waiman Long wrote:
> > Make some miscellaneous fixes to the first paragraph of "ECC memory":
> >  - Change the incorrect "74 bits" to "72 bits".
> >  - Change "mentioned on" to "mentioned in".
> >  - Remove the extra "extra".
> >  - Rephrase some sentences as suggested by Matthew Wilcox.
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: Waiman Long <longman@redhat.com>  
> 
> Reviewed-by: Matthew Wilcox (Oracle) <willy@infradead.org>
> 
Applied, thanks.

jon
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diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/ras.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/ras.rst
index 0310db624964..e48f6bcf305b 100644
--- a/Documentation/admin-guide/ras.rst
+++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/ras.rst
@@ -156,11 +156,11 @@  the labels provided by the BIOS won't match the real ones.
 ECC memory
 ----------
 
-As mentioned on the previous section, ECC memory has extra bits to be
-used for error correction. So, on 64 bit systems, a memory module
-has 64 bits of *data width*, and 74 bits of *total width*. So, there are
-8 bits extra bits to be used for the error detection and correction
-mechanisms. Those extra bits are called *syndrome*\ [#f1]_\ [#f2]_.
+As mentioned in the previous section, ECC memory has extra bits to be
+used for error correction. In the above example, a memory module has
+64 bits of *data width*, and 72 bits of *total width*.  The extra 8
+bits which are used for the error detection and correction mechanisms
+are referred to as the *syndrome*\ [#f1]_\ [#f2]_.
 
 So, when the cpu requests the memory controller to write a word with
 *data width*, the memory controller calculates the *syndrome* in real time,