| Message ID | 20241107013849.47833-1-xandfury@gmail.com (mailing list archive) |
|---|---|
| State | Accepted |
| Headers | show |
| Series | hwmon: Documentation: Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation | expand |
On Wed, Nov 06, 2024 at 06:38:49PM -0700, Abhinav Saxena wrote: > Fix several grammatical issues in the fan speed trip points documentation: > - Replace awkward "which % the fan should run at at" construction with > clearer "that specify the percentage at which" > - Fix incorrect "is chip depended" to "are chip dependent" for correct > verb agreement and adjective form > - Improve readability by reorganizing first sentence and separating the > complex explanation into simpler parts > - Add hyphen before "see" to improve readability > - Remove redundant "at" in temperature description > > No functional changes, documentation only. > > Signed-off-by: Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@gmail.com> Applied, after fixing the subject (which needs to include the affected driver). Thanks, Guenter
diff --git a/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst b/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst index 38e30fbd4806..53d32bf06b70 100644 --- a/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst +++ b/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst @@ -178,10 +178,11 @@ Writing an unsupported mode will result in an invalid parameter error. available on the F71858FG / F8000 if the fan channel is in RPM mode. * 2: Normal auto mode - You can define a number of temperature/fan speed trip points, which % the - fan should run at at this temp and which temp a fan should follow using the - standard sysfs interface. The number and type of trip points is chip - depended, see which files are available in sysfs. + You can define a number of temperature/fan speed trip points that specify + the percentage at which the fan should run at each temperature, and which + temperature sensor a fan should follow, using the standard sysfs interface. + The number and type of trip points are chip dependent - see the available + files in sysfs. Fan/PWM channel 3 of the F8000 is always in this mode! * 3: Thermostat mode (Only available on the F8000 when in duty cycle mode)
Fix several grammatical issues in the fan speed trip points documentation: - Replace awkward "which % the fan should run at at" construction with clearer "that specify the percentage at which" - Fix incorrect "is chip depended" to "are chip dependent" for correct verb agreement and adjective form - Improve readability by reorganizing first sentence and separating the complex explanation into simpler parts - Add hyphen before "see" to improve readability - Remove redundant "at" in temperature description No functional changes, documentation only. Signed-off-by: Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@gmail.com> --- Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst | 9 +++++---- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)